Continuing the painting

I took my unfinished piece to my Tuesday critique class. This is a group of artist's whose work I admire & opinions I respect. We decided the work looks better sideways, it also needed a bit more dark in the right top corner. I also added some dark in the bottom left corner. I then felt it still needed something so added more paper at the top.

I think I need to live with it for a while to see if it is finished.

Finally doing a blog

My husband says I need to blog to get my work out more, so here I am. We'll see how well I manage to keep this going. I thought today I would show a work in progress, to show how I work. This first image is the very first step. I have painted the canvas in a very random way with only one colour.

I then used black spray paint. I really like graffitti art. I like to incorporate random bits of it into my work.

I then began glueing on a variety of papers, Japanese, my own burnt papers, whatever I find that I like. Adding some stencil letters again adds that graffitti feel. I know this isn't done but it feels like its on its way, I'm just not sure where to.
Give me a few days then we'll see where it ends up.